March 19th was a monumental writing day. That is the day that I got my first request for a partial manuscript! I have queried some twenty five agents and I finally got a response. Reading over the email she sent requesting the material left me reading it over four then five times. When I got home that evening I was able to sit down and really read through the email. Very specific instructions were outlined in the email, and asked for a two page synopsis, a biography, and the first fifty pages of my manuscript, double spaced with .5 inch margins all around…justified.
Querying, itself, has proven to be a difficult task. The first obstacle is finding a website that gives information on any agent or agency. Then you have to read each persons biography to find out which one, if any, will appeal to your style of story. Once you have found the perfect match, there is a process of rewriting the letter to meet the specific needs of the agent. The rest, we have all done a thousand times. OH and by all means don’t forget to compare your letter to Query shark.
I was completely unaware of the additional items that were needed once a partial was requested. I thought my query was as chopped down a synopsis as you could get! I began my search at 2 o’clock in the morning to find out what she might have been looking for when it came to a synopsis. Seeking representation means you have to play by their rules and ensure that everything meets their requirements before you can even decide if you want them or not. Oh, yes! Don’t forget that you can go through all of these hoops and ladders and finally decide that this is not the agent for you.
It took three days before I could respond to the email I was so excited to finally receive. I read through those first fifty pages about fifty times. I then had to write an acceptable synopsis using Nathan Bransford’s blog as a guideline. I then dusted off an old biography, fixed it up then sent my reply. Now I shall wait 12 weeks before I inquire if she liked it or not, but here’s hoping that I get a full request soon!
Caleb A. Mertz
Good morning! I am writing to you now with the hopes that some of you will happily provide some feedback on which of the following three synopsis’ would make you want to read “The Unexpected”
Everyday across the media there are invigorating statements relating to the end of the world. Nostradamus, the Bible, and the mayan calendar all predict the end to be in 2012. What if we lived to see a world beyond this where there was peace and abundance. What if this was the perfect world to begin the ultimate chapter of the end, the Revelation.
When Andrew Rakford becomes President of the United States of America he wishes his mother was there because she was the one that always said that God had a great plan for him. Now as he grows and survives multiple terrorist attacks his life begins to change without much more than a thought towards it. Forgetting his mother and moving forward with his own plans he soon finds what this great plan had always been. The Anti-Christ has never been a position that has been so well taken with a drive and dillegence as by Andrew Rakford
The threats of 2012 loom everyday on the news, in our minds, and across civilization. What if we made it past this to see a world that initiates it’s president with an Inaugural massacre which makes way to the great Christian Revolt? “The Unexpected” creates a world much like the one we live in today but filled with anxious twists of what’s norm, from Christian terrorists, blatant execution without due diligence, and modern day concentration camps.
Andrew Rakford is a young President of the United States starting out at the youngest age allowable, 35. With a swarm of warped memories of his childhood and life practices Andrew is capable of using charm as well as intelligence in attempts to literally make everybody happy. Till he learns of the truth of his mother’s reactions to his life, and the true reason why his father had left so many years ago does he remain a man of unfathomable patience and kindness. Smart twists to the plot and story line add the dramatic effect of this novel never truly allowing the reader to see what will happen, though told through a third person omniscient point of view.
Imagine that you are at the ripe young age of 35. You’ve just received a promotion where you feel you can make everything better, the wrongs into rights and the woes into victories. You’re mother always used to tell you that you were going to be a mighty man of God after a priest had prophesized this for you. Here you sit being agnostic, but still having a love for your deceased mother, her lovely sayings, and realistic revelations.
The Christians have united and created a terrorist group that is reigning destruction on the United States and countries abroad because they feel that the government has become too corrupt to go on. A combination of assassination attempts, terrorist attacks, and a plethora of missing people finally makes you initiate a plan in order to keep the world safe. A plan that would ensure people follow you, and don’t oppose you. A plan where the world is the edge of your every command. You now know that you are the President of the United States, and you are the Anti-christ.